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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Tacky sentence?

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"She is most definitely not telling him that the affection he shows to her makes her so nervous she fears being close to him."
  

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" Just a couple of changes/additions that make it a little easier to read, I think.

  • " Just a couple of changes/additions that make it a little easier to read, I think.
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Anonymous She is most definitely not telling him that the affection he shows for her makes her so nervous that she fears being close to him."
Just a couple of changes/additions that make it a little easier to read, I think.

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