Table - Ielts writing task 1
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Topic: The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The table depicts the percentage of spending on three categories, namely Food/Drinks/Tobacco, Clothing/Footwear, and Leisure/Education in five different countries in 2002.
Overall, people had an inclination to spend most of their money on Food/Drink/Tobacco, whereas Leisure/Education attracted least investment of all categories. On the other hand, Turkish expenditure dominated two sectors, while Swedish spend least of all.
With respect to Food/Drinks/Tobacco, the expense of Turkish on this sector was the highest (32.14%), doubling that of Sweden, which had a smaller proportion than any of the other countries (15.77%). A similar pattern for Turkish expenditure was observed in Leisure/Education, with a figure of 4.35% reported, as opposed to just nearly a half of which in Spain (1.98%).
Concerning Clothes/Footwear, spending of Irish, Spanish, and Turkish averaged around 6.5%. Meanwhile, Italy had the highest expenditure level for these commodities, with a total spending of roundly 9.00%, which was 150% higher than that of Sweden, with only 5.4% of money spent in 2002.
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Dear Thu Le; You are not learning much from my comments, because you still do not describe the table completely in your first paragraph. What are the country's names? You need to revise and fix the mistakes in your previous essays instead of posting new ones.
- Dear Thu Le; You are not learning much from my comments, because you still do not describe the table completely in your first paragraph.
- What are the country's names?
- You need to revise and fix the mistakes in your previous essays instead of posting new ones.
- So I will just highlight the text with mistakes.
- The table depicts the percentage of spending on three categories, namely Food/Drinks/Tobacco, Clothing/Footwear, and Leisure/Education in five different countries in 2002.
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Dear Thu Le;
You are not learning much from my comments, because you still do not describe the table completely in your first paragraph. What are the country's names?
You need to revise and fix the mistakes in your previous essays instead of posting new ones.
So I will just highlight the text with mistakes.
The table depicts the percentage of spending on three ca
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