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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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I need to describe 2 tables about big winners and big losers brands. Can somebody help me and my mistakes, please!
Below are two tables which show the big winners and big losers global brands ranking. At the both tables we can see the Brand name, the brand value in billion dollars in 2006 and 2007 and its change in percent. I would like to start with the big winners. It can be clearly seen that absolutely leader in this chart is the brand Google. Its change in brand value is much higher as by other brands 44%. The second and the third place take the brands Zara with 22% and Apple with 21%. The fourth successful brand in this ranking is Nintendo with 18% and at the end of out top 5 situated Starbucks with 17%.
The second table shows the big losers brands. The biggest loser in this chart is Ford with -19%. Then follows GAP with -15% and Kodak with -12%. The change in brand value by Pizza Hut and Motorola is the same -9%. These companies may thing about the strategy of the big winners to achieve some day the top of the most successful brands
Below are two tables which show the big winners and big losers global brands ranking. At the both tables we can see the Brand name, the brand value in billion dollars in 2006 and 2007 and its change in percent. I would like to start with the big winners. It can be clearly seen that absolutely leader in this chart is the brand Google. Its change in brand value is much higher as by other brands 44%. The second and the third place take the brands Zara with 22% and Apple with 21%. The fourth successful brand in this ranking is Nintendo with 18% and at the end of out top 5 situated Starbucks with 17%.
The second table shows the big losers brands. The biggest loser in this chart is Ford with -19%. Then follows GAP with -15% and Kodak with -12%. The change in brand value by Pizza Hut and Motorola is the same -9%. These companies may thing about the strategy of the big winners to achieve some day the top of the most successful brands
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Here are my suggested corrections. The boldfaced words are my additions and the crossouts are my deletions of the original text. Below are two tables which show the big winners and the big losers among global brands and their ranking.
- Here are my suggested corrections.
- The boldfaced words are my additions and the crossouts are my deletions of the original text.
- Below are two tables which show the big winners and the big losers among global brands and their ranking.
- At the In both tables we can see the B b rand name, the brand value in billion dollars in 2006 and in 2007 and its change in percent.
- <New paragraph> I would like to start with the big winners.
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Here are my suggested corrections. The boldfaced words are my additions and the crossouts are my deletions of the original text.
Below are two tables which show the big winners and the big losers among global brands and their ranking.At the In both tables we can see the Bbrand name, the brand value in billion dollars i
Below are two tables which show the big winners and the big losers among global brands and their ranking.
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