Syntax Of The Sentences p.3

Continuation from my previous post. Can't link to it as they are waiting for moderation still. If someone can spare some time to check this I would be grateful. I did my best but I know it is not enough for publication. Thank you.

"What are you waiting for??? Run down and get him before it is too late. I can't help you. Go, go, go !"

"Now I am sure, Carpone got all his men on the streets and police is doing nothing about it. He bribed NY's City Police Commissioner and he will steal all the cars tonight. He was talking about it for months. I have never thought he was serious about it!"

"As you can see there is plenty of stairwells around for you to use. Come, come. We can't stop now."

"Trovato! Look, if your torch is low on battery you can charge it up quickly here. There are few spots like this around. You will find them..."

"Ohh what is that? Noo, not that. That's just another stairwell, silly you! There, on the ground, it is a spare battery for your torch. How lucky is that, looks like you are running low as well. Pick it up let's go."

"Nice jump, now let's move quietly. I think I've heard something."

"Wow! That was bright! Flash like this will scare away all of Carpone's punny servants! There was Capo with them as well. Did you see him? That was that huge guy, normally they won't scare so easily. Now jump down with me."

"Bingo. Look down there. Al's men are there. Hey, a flash bomb! What a luck! It is silent but the light is all we need. Activate it now. I will wait here."

"Stop here for a second. See this billboard? My cousin Steve works for them. He says that they are going to be big soon! And Steve never lied to me! We are almost finished, let's head towards the Tremont Park."

"Look at this ride on the roadside. That doesn't look good. Now I will explain to you how Al's men work when they steal cars. Let's get closer."

"So... They will come usually in four stages, first they will break a glass and, come back shortly, steal the radio, then if all is good and no one has seen them, they will come back again to break the ignition. The fourth and final stage is a steal. Sometimes you will see big Capos. They are skilled enough to steal any car in just one go! "

end of part 3 of 4

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