Syntax Of The Sentences p.1

Hello guys. Happy New Year!

I would like to thank you a lot for a help in my last post with checking syntax for the game I am making. I have few more sentences. If someone can spare some time to have a look at them and tell me where I can improve them that would be fantastic. Again words written in bold are own names. The font that I am using does not differentiate between small and capital letters so that is not so important. As advised, I am breaking this into few posts, so it is easier for people. Thank you, I didn't realize it is so much. Any help is fantastic! So here they are:

The idea behind the "The Watch - Midnight Bronx" is something completely new, I love it"

"New York needs you! Al Carpone's mobsters are getting ready to swipe the cars in the area on a massive scale!"

"To learn fundamentals of the game follow this quick tutorial. Press "Continue" to learn about the interface."

"And last but not least, this is your public trust meter. Keep an eye on it!"

"Now press "Continue" and find Disobedient Diego. He used to work for Al Carpone and he is more than happy to tell you few things to make it easier for you!"

"pssst... Hi, My name is Diego. I used to work for Al Carpone, but not anymore. He needs to be stopped. I can help you to thwart his plans."

"Meet me in the alley behind this hotel. Just east of here. Check your maps if you can't find me. I have marked myself with a green dot on your map.
A dopo..."

more in part 2