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ARo Posted 21 years ago
Vocabulary

syntax of my sentence

Hello!

Furthermore I wrote this sentence in my essay:

"This contributes to the created optimistic outcome."

My theacher changed it like that:

"This contributes to the optimistic outcome created."

Why?

Thanks a lot,

aRo
  

Top answer

The point may be that whatever you have in mind contributed to the optimism of the outcome (that has been created). So we have : this contributes to the optimistic outcome (that has been) created.

— Pieanne

  • The point may be that whatever you have in mind contributed to the optimism of the outcome (that has been created).
  • So we have : this contributes to the optimistic outcome (that has been) created.
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The point may be that whatever you have in mind contributed to the optimism of the outcome (that has been created). So we have : this contributes to the optimistic outcome (that has been) created.
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I prefer your teacher's version, but how can an outcome be optimistic?
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an outcome of a novel for instance
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