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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Syntax errors and corection
Hi everyone ! Can someone tell me if the syntax is descent, otherwise, can you correct it please !
cheers !
Caught in the Wirl of Work
English people are laborious. Notwithstanding, over the years ,they found working exhausting, they are weary of toiling. Overwork used to be beneficial for the evolution of society, now it’s the opposite.
As the time goes on, according to an annual survey, employees, from CEOs down to junior feel uneasy about their lives. Most of them work all the day long, plus the evening or the week end. They fell there job jeopardize. Because of the new technologie are in permanent progress, and the trend of corportion to merge, job has become insecure
Almost consider working habits harm they familial relationship, and even their buisness productivity.
These are the people who manage and rule their companie.
Governements should act. Money is not the only key to the hapyness.
cheers !
Caught in the Wirl of Work
English people are laborious. Notwithstanding, over the years ,they found working exhausting, they are weary of toiling. Overwork used to be beneficial for the evolution of society, now it’s the opposite.
As the time goes on, according to an annual survey, employees, from CEOs down to junior feel uneasy about their lives. Most of them work all the day long, plus the evening or the week end. They fell there job jeopardize. Because of the new technologie are in permanent progress, and the trend of corportion to merge, job has become insecure
Almost consider working habits harm they familial relationship, and even their buisness productivity.
These are the people who manage and rule their companie.
Governements should act. Money is not the only key to the hapyness.
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I have underscored some problem areas: Caught in the Wirl of Work English people are laborious. Notwithstanding, over the years ,they found working exhausting, they are weary of toiling. Overwork used to be beneficial for the evolution of society, now it’s the opposite.
- I have underscored some problem areas: Caught in the Wirl of Work English people are laborious.
- Notwithstanding, over the years ,they found working exhausting, they are weary of toiling.
- Overwork used to be beneficial for the evolution of society, now it’s the opposite.
- As the time goes on, according to an annual survey, employees, from CEOs down to junior feel uneasy about their lives.
- Most of them work all the day long, plus the evening or the week end .
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I have underscored some problem areas:
Caught in the Wirl of Work
English people are laborious. Notwithstanding, over the years ,they found working exhausting, they are weary of toiling. Overwork used to be beneficial for the evolution of society, now it’s the opposite.
As the time goes on, according to an annual survey
I have underscored some problem areas:
Caught in the Wirl of Work
English people are laborious. Notwithstanding, over the years ,they found working exhausting, they are weary of toiling. Overwork used to be beneficial for the evolution of society, now it’s the opposite.
As the time goes on, according to an annual survey
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