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Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
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Can someone please check this sentence? Let me know if there's a grammar mistake, thanks in advance.
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Tub and In are a homeless musician brothers. They find villagers who have been robbed and killed by KhunRam, a local warlord who tries to put the kingdom of Siam into chaos and accuses Sin, The Warrior. When KhunRam plans to take Sin and kill him together with Prince Jantaboon, Tub, In and Aungkarb, a concubine to the prince, each with fighting skills try to stop his evil plan. Together, they join forces with Sin and his friends to bring down KhunRam.
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Tub and In are a homeless musician brothers. They find villagers who have been robbed and killed by KhunRam, a local warlord who tries to put the kingdom of Siam into chaos and accuses Sin, The Warrior. When KhunRam plans to take Sin and kill him together with Prince Jantaboon, Tub, In and Aungkarb, a concubine to the prince, each with fighting skills try to stop his evil plan. Together, they join forces with Sin and his friends to bring down KhunRam.
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I have underlined some problems: Tub and In are a homeless musician brothers . They find villagers who have been robbed and killed by KhunRam, a local warlord who tries to put the kingdom of Siam into chaos and accuses Sin, The Warrior. When KhunRam plans to take Sin and kill him together with Prince Jantaboon, Tub, In and Aungkarb, a concubine to the prince, each with fighting s kills try to stop his evil plan.
- I have underlined some problems: Tub and In are a homeless musician brothers .
- They find villagers who have been robbed and killed by KhunRam, a local warlord who tries to put the kingdom of Siam into chaos and accuses Sin, The Warrior.
- When KhunRam plans to take Sin and kill him together with Prince Jantaboon, Tub, In and Aungkarb, a concubine to the prince, each with fighting s kills try to stop his evil plan.
- Together, they join forces with Sin and his friends to bring down KhunRam.
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I have underlined some problems:
Tub and In are a homeless musician brothers. They find villagers who have been robbed and killed by KhunRam, a local warlord who tries to put the kingdom of Siam into chaos and accuses Sin, The Warrior. When KhunRam plans to take Sin and kill him together with Prince Jantaboon, Tub, In and Aungkarb, a concubine to the prince, each w
Tub and In are a homeless musician brothers. They find villagers who have been robbed and killed by KhunRam, a local warlord who tries to put the kingdom of Siam into chaos and accuses Sin, The Warrior. When KhunRam plans to take Sin and kill him together with Prince Jantaboon, Tub, In and Aungkarb, a concubine to the prince, each w
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Mister MicawberTub and In are a homeless musician brothers. They find villagers who have been robbed and killed by KhunRam, a local warlord who tries to put the kingdom of Siam into chaos and accuses Sin, The Warrior. When KhunRam plans to take Sin and kill him together with Prince Jantaboon, Tub, In and Aungkarb, a concubine to the prince, each with fighting skills try t
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OK, but:
...prince, each with fighting skills, try to stop his evil plan...
...prince, each with fighting skills, try to stop his evil plan...
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