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AllSky Posted 14 years ago
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Swing
http://www.mercurynews.com/cupertino/ci_21388029/man-pleads-not-guilty-2009-cupertino-killing
"Yi reportedly said he would not pay Zhao the $1,000 until all the work was completed. Zhao then allegedly swung his pickax with the flat side at Yi, hitting him in the back and then the head."
Should it be edited to one of these:
"swung his pickax with the flat side towards at Yi"
"swung his pickax with the flat side forward at Yi"
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"Yi reportedly said he would not pay Zhao the $1,000 until all the work was completed. Zhao then allegedly swung his pickax with the flat side at Yi, hitting him in the back and then the head."
Should it be edited to one of these:
"swung his pickax with the flat side towards at Yi"
"swung his pickax with the flat side forward at Yi"
?
Top answer
"swung his pickax with the flat side at Yi" Good. "swung his pickax with the flat side towards at Yi" Good. ) "swung his pickax with the flat side forward at Yi" No.
- "swung his pickax with the flat side at Yi" Good.
- "swung his pickax with the flat side towards at Yi" Good.
- ) "swung his pickax with the flat side forward at Yi" No.
- CJ
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2 Answers
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"swung his pickax with the flat side at Yi" Good.
"swung his pickax with the flat side towardsat Yi" Good. (No 'at'.)
"swung his pickax with the flat side
"swung his pickax with the flat side towards
"swung his pickax with the flat side
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Zhao then allegedly hit Yi in the back and then the head with the flat of his pickax.
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