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Frostwhite Posted 15 years ago
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Survey I made
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81% of the students had a positive expectation and from those students 20% changed their expectation from positive to negative and from negative to positive after SCBI classes. Group A & B and C & D showed very different results. Around 60% of the students in Group C & D changed their expectation positively whereas no students in Group A & B changed. Exceptionally, 11% of the students in Group A transformed their positive perception into negative. The finding showed SCBI influenced students’ expectation positively especially students in Group C and D.
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81% of the students had a positive expectation and from those students 20% changed their expectation from positive to negative and from negative to positive after SCBI classes. Group A & B and C & D showed very different results. Around 60% of the students in Group C & D changed their expectation positively whereas no students in Group A & B changed. Exceptionally, 11% of the students in Group A transformed their positive perception into negative. The finding showed SCBI influenced students’ expectation positively especially students in Group C and D.
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Hi! I revised it again. Please take a look at it..
- Hi!
- I revised it again.
- Please take a look at it..
- Thanks!
- "81% of the students in all groups had a positive expectation.
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Hi! I revised it again. Please take a look at it.. Thanks!
"81% of the students in all groups had a positive expectation. Some students from Groups A,B,C and D changed their minds after taking the SCBI classes. Each group showed very different results. From groups C and D, around 60% of the students changed their expectation from negative to positive. And there is no change in the studen
"81% of the students in all groups had a positive expectation. Some students from Groups A,B,C and D changed their minds after taking the SCBI classes. Each group showed very different results. From groups C and D, around 60% of the students changed their expectation from negative to positive. And there is no change in the studen
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Hi,
To me, this seems incomprehensible to anyone who is not familiar with the details of your survey.
Is there some way you can present your results in a more organized way?
Clive
To me, this seems incomprehensible to anyone who is not familiar with the details of your survey.
Is there some way you can present your results in a more organized way?
Clive
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Group name | The students’ aptitude of subjects (Experimental group) | Student numbers |
Group A | Students who like Both English and Science. | 36 |
Group B | Students who like English only. |
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Hi,
That doesn't seem to relate closely to what you wrote. I suppose the other graphs would help.
I wasn't really asking you to explain the survey to me. I assume your readers will be aware of what the survey was all about. Is that correct?
That doesn't seem to relate closely to what you wrote. I suppose the other graphs would help.
I wasn't really asking you to explain the survey to me. I assume your readers will be aware of what the survey was all about. Is that correct?
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I tried to make it clearer on my second post but I guess it didn't help. Thanks Sir Clive! I'll just try to revise it, and I'll have it checked here when I'm done. I can't explain well the results of the survey I made.
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Hi,
OK. The main thing is to write it in a way that you think your readers will be able to understand easily.
Clive
OK. The main thing is to write it in a way that you think your readers will be able to understand easily.
Clive
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