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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Surprised / surprising

Are the underlined sentences acceptable?

It was my first time to visit the headquarters of LiveABC Magazine Company.
(1) I was surprised at how it enriched my experience.
(2) How surprising it is!
  

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Hi, Are the underlined sentences acceptable? I t was my first time visiting the headquarters of LiveABC Magazine don't add 'company' . (1) I was surprised at how it enriched my experience.

  • Hi, Are the underlined sentences acceptable?
  • I t was my first time visiting the headquarters of LiveABC Magazine don't add 'company' .
  • (1) I was surprised at how it enriched my experience.
  • (2) How surprising it was !
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Hi,

Are the underlined sentences acceptable?

It was my first time visiting the headquarters of LiveABC Magazine don't add 'company'.
(1) I was surprised at how it enriched my experience.
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I rewrote the sentences as following. Which of the underlined sentences is acceptable, #1 or #2? In #1, should I explain what experience I got?

1. It was my first time visiting the headquarters of LiveABC Magazine. I was surprised at how it enriched my experience. That was really a special experience for us and we learned how magazines and CD-ROMs are made.

2. I
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Hi,

I rewrote the sentences as following. Which of the underlined sentences is acceptable, #1 or #2? In #1, should I explain what experience I got?

1. It was my first time visiting the headquarters of LiveABC Magazine. I was surprised at how it enriched my experience. That was really a special experience for us and we learned how magazines and CD-ROMs are made.

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