Hello forum, now below is a mail I sent to a gaming company.
dear supercell I have a question suppose, my current village is saved in Email Removed and after opening the game I tried to connect the village with Email Removed which is fresh email not connected with any game what will happen, will my village progress be lost or my previous mail will not be connected from next time with google play, because if so occurs then there is a more chance for the village to be stole. please help.
Now I wrote this mail to a gaming company about my problem, I know here is lots of grammatical mistake please make it correct, as it will help me to learn. It's all about a game "clash of clans"
I cannot understand your letter. I don't play computer games like this. Please write it in very simple sentences.
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I cannot understand your letter. I don't play computer games like this. Please write it in very simple sentences.
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This not natural or clear. Do you mean an email or a letter?
A big problem here is that you have jammed several sentences together without starting each one with a capital letter and ending each one with punctuation (usually a period or a question mark). This makes your writing hard to understand, and it makes your level of English seem very low. Do you want to try to correct this and repost it?