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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
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sunburn, nap, isolated

I don't like sunburn, so If I go out in the hot sun, I would feel dizzy.

I'm feeling very sleepy now, so I think it is better if I take a nap for an hour.

Totally we are four brothers. These three brothers have the same voice as we have. Only the fourth one is isolated from us.

Please correct my sentences.
  

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My try: I don't like to get sunburn, so if I go out in the hot sun, I would will feel dizzy. I'm feeling very sleepy now, so I think it is better if I take a nap for an hour. okay.

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  • My try: I don't like to get sunburn, so if I go out in the hot sun, I would will feel dizzy.
  • I'm feeling very sleepy now, so I think it is better if I take a nap for an hour.
  • okay.
  • Totally we are four brothers.
  • I have no idea about totally .
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My try:

I don't like to get sunburn, so if I go out in the hot sun, I would will feel dizzy.

I'm feeling very sleepy now, so I think it is better if I take a nap for an hour. okay.

Totally we are four brothers.
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User_garyI don't like sunburn, so If I go out in the hot sun, I would feel dizzy.

I'm feeling very sleepy now, so I think it is better if I take a nap for an hour.

Totally we are four brothers. These three brothers have the same voice as we have. Only the fourth one is isolated from us.

Please correct my sentences.

Sunburn
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