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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Summer school

I was wondering if you'd like to take over planning the Magic Mountain event, because summer school has/had started for me and I'm gonna have my hands full with everything that's already been going on.

Please proofread. Thank you!
  

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PreciousJones I was wondering if you'd like to take over planning the Magic Mountain event, because summer school has started for me and I'm going to have my hands full with everything that's already going on . Please, please, don't ever write "gonna," unless you are faithfully transcribing conversation (or you want to go out of your way to make a bad impression). I know you want to make a good impression, since you say "please" and "thank you," so I thought I should point this out.

  • PreciousJones I was wondering if you'd like to take over planning the Magic Mountain event, because summer school has started for me and I'm going to have my hands full with everything that's already going on .
  • Please, please, don't ever write "gonna," unless you are faithfully transcribing conversation (or you want to go out of your way to make a bad impression).
  • I know you want to make a good impression, since you say "please" and "thank you," so I thought I should point this out.
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PreciousJonesI was wondering if you'd like to take over planning the Magic Mountain event, because summer school has started for me and I'm going to have my hands full with everything that's already going on.
Please, please, don't ever write "gonna," unless you are faithfully transcribing conversation (or you want to go out of your way to

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