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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Summary Writing/Tagline

Hi, I need some feedback on the following tagline. Let me know if you spot any errors?. Thank you for your help.

Summary
High school freshman Cocoa Hoto got lost and bumped into a coffee shop called "Rabbit House" while looking for a boarding house for the upcoming semester of her new school. Luckily, Rabbit House is the boarding house she's looking for, and to return the favor Cocoa starts working at the coffee shop alongside quiet and cool Chino, strong and athletic Rize, plus Chiya and Syaro from Japanese-styled coffee shop Amausaan, as well as the shop mascot rabbit Tippy, who sometimes doesn't quite act like a rabbit...

Tagline
1. The ongoing adventures of five girls daily lives
2. The daily living challenges of five friends
3. A journey to gain back what they lost
4. All they need to do is find a way to get the money
  

Top answer

You should register- use a fake name so we can teach you. Anonymous Luckily, Rabbit House leads her to the boarding house that she's looking for, I need some clarification about the link between the boarding house and the coffee shop- are they magically linked? Anonymous shop 's mascot Anonymous 1.

  • You should register- use a fake name so we can teach you.
  • Anonymous Luckily, Rabbit House leads her to the boarding house that she's looking for, I need some clarification about the link between the boarding house and the coffee shop- are they magically linked?
  • Anonymous shop 's mascot Anonymous 1.
  • The daily living challenges of five friends 3.
  • A journey to gain back what they have lost 4.
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You should register- use a fake name so we can teach you.
AnonymousLuckily, Rabbit House leads her to the boarding house that she's looking for,
I need some clarification about the link between the boarding house and the coffee shop- are they magically linked?
Anonymous shop's mascot
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