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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Hi all, Would someone be so kind and could maybe check this summary, please.
Short description
Living in poverty has led Hamid gets involved in gangsterism headed by his uncle. How soon will he realize being a gangster never bring any good to his family?
Long description
As a child, Hamid has lived in poverty. But, his will to live grows stronger as he fights for his family’s survival. Soon, Hamid is put under the care of a Tomoi master and his uncle, Don. He trains to become the best. His heroic virtues gain him respect among his friends and cause terror among his enemies. However, troubles begin to unfold as Hamid gets involved in the violence of gangsterism in Chowrasta, Penang. But, his uncle who is the gang leader encourages him to be a better man. .
Short description
Living in poverty has led Hamid gets involved in gangsterism headed by his uncle. How soon will he realize being a gangster never bring any good to his family?
Long description
As a child, Hamid has lived in poverty. But, his will to live grows stronger as he fights for his family’s survival. Soon, Hamid is put under the care of a Tomoi master and his uncle, Don. He trains to become the best. His heroic virtues gain him respect among his friends and cause terror among his enemies. However, troubles begin to unfold as Hamid gets involved in the violence of gangsterism in Chowrasta, Penang. But, his uncle who is the gang leader encourages him to be a better man. .
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) involved in a violent gang headed by his uncle. How soon will he realize that being a gangster never bring s any good to his family? But, his uncle , who is the gang leader , encourages him to be a better man.
- ) involved in a violent gang headed by his uncle.
- How soon will he realize that being a gangster never bring s any good to his family?
- But, his uncle , who is the gang leader , encourages him to be a better man.
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Living in poverty has led Hamid gets (You have two verbs where only one is expected.) involved in a violent gang headed by his uncle. How soon will he realize that being a gangster never brings any good to his family?
But, his uncle, who is the gang lea
But, his uncle, who is the gang lea
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Thank you for the kind feedback, sir. I've rewritten the summary, please take a look.
When Hamid gets involved in a the world of violent gangsterism, headed by his uncle Don, how soon will he realize that being a gangster never brings any good to his family?
When Hamid gets involved in a the world of violent gangsterism, headed by his uncle Don, how soon will he realize that being a gangster never brings any good to his family?
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When Hamid gets involved in a the world of violent gangsterism, headed by his uncle Don (Is Don the governor of the whole world?), how soon will he realize that being a gangster never brings any good to his family?
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How about this:
When Hamid gets involved in a violent gang headed by his uncle, how soon will he realize that being a gangster never brings any good to his family?
When Hamid gets involved in a violent gang headed by his uncle, how soon will he realize that being a gangster never brings any good to his family?
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Jenn123How about this:When Hamid gets involved in a violent gang headed by his uncle, how soon will he realize that being a gangster never brings any good to his family?Good!
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