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Damir Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Summary correction

Hi!

I have to write a summery from a text, and I want to know if it's correct. (I think there's no need for an entire text, although it's not big). If anybody has time please check it and correct.

Thanks in advance!

Business management is the process of running a business which has to be profitable, liquid and successful in solving problems. Business managers must have wide knowledge and experience in various business areas, and top management must be able to maximize the value of the business.


  

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It looks ok. I just have a question on one phrase. Damir Business management is the process of running a business which has to be profitable, liquid and successful in solving problems .

  • It looks ok.
  • I just have a question on one phrase.
  • Damir Business management is the process of running a business which has to be profitable, liquid and successful in solving problems .
  • ) Business managers must have wide knowledge and experience in various business areas, and top management must be able to maximize the value of the business.
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It looks ok. I just have a question on one phrase.
DamirBusiness management is the process of running a business which has to be profitable, liquid and successful in solving problems. (Is the business solving problems successfully or the managers?) Business managers must have wide knowledge and experience in various business areas, and top managem
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the business is solving the problems successfully. Emotion: wink
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Hi

If you want to know how good a summary it is, you should have quoted the original text. No one can advise you on how good a summary is unless they see what you are trying to summarize. If you just wamt your language checking, then that's a different matter.

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