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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Hi, please help to correct my writing if there are any mistakes,thank you.

Short summary
A forensics photographer lured into a world of shamans and mystic creatures while helping his detective friend investigate a series of macabre murders.

Long Summary
A man named Adam, a forensics photographer who is dragged by his best friend, Detective Man, into an investigation of a series of macabre ritual murders in the city. Adam soon befriends Iva, a woman who is on a mission to rescue the souls of the people in her tribe that have been trapped inside a glass plate negative.
  

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Anonymous A forens ic photographer is lured into a world of shamans and mystic creatures while helping his detective friend investigate a series of macabre murders. Anonymous A man named Adam, a forens ic photographer who is dragged by his best friend, Detective Man, into an investigation of a series of macabre ritual murders in the city. Adam soon befriends Iva, a woman who is on a mission to rescue the souls of the people in her tribe that have been trapped inside a glass plate negative.

  • Anonymous A forens ic photographer is lured into a world of shamans and mystic creatures while helping his detective friend investigate a series of macabre murders.
  • Anonymous A man named Adam, a forens ic photographer who is dragged by his best friend, Detective Man, into an investigation of a series of macabre ritual murders in the city.
  • Adam soon befriends Iva, a woman who is on a mission to rescue the souls of the people in her tribe that have been trapped inside a glass plate negative.
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AnonymousA forensic photographer is lured into a world of shamans and mystic creatures while helping his detective friend investigate a series of macabre murders.
AnonymousA man named Adam, a forensic photographer who is dragged by his best friend, Detective Man, into an investigation of a ser
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Hi teechr, I have revised the long summary, can you please take a look into this. Thank you.

Adam, a forensic photographer is dragged by his best friend, the detective Man, into an investigation of a series of macabre ritual murders. At the same time, Adam’s innocuous pastime soon turns darker when he spies Iva, a young woman from Borneo. Smitten by her, he is soon entangled in her web of
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I prefer the former; it's more concise.

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