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Summary
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Short Plot
Two teens learn to love each other when both are diagnosed with cancer. As one begins to lose hope to live, the other one becomes her pillar of strength despite the killer disease slowly consumes them.
Long Plot
Thia is a kindergarten teacher who lives a simple life. She accidently meets Adil, a young man who saves her from a snatch thief. Soon they get to know that, they both are diagnosed with cancer and they only have a few months to live. Inadvertently, they start falling for each other but Thia’s ‘cancer’ is spreading faster than expected and she may not have much time left. How does Adil support her to courage and strength to fight this disease?
Short Plot
Two teens learn to love each other when both are diagnosed with cancer. As one begins to lose hope to live, the other one becomes her pillar of strength despite the killer disease slowly consumes them.
Long Plot
Thia is a kindergarten teacher who lives a simple life. She accidently meets Adil, a young man who saves her from a snatch thief. Soon they get to know that, they both are diagnosed with cancer and they only have a few months to live. Inadvertently, they start falling for each other but Thia’s ‘cancer’ is spreading faster than expected and she may not have much time left. How does Adil support her to courage and strength to fight this disease?
Top answer
How about this long plot? A pre-school teacher, Thia, and the man she loves, Adil, are sitting in a specialist hospital's seats, stupefied of their cancer diagnoses. They are constantly arguing, but the little time cancer leaves them has ironically brought the two closer than ever; when Thia's tumor spreads faster, Adil cements her strength sturdy, and when Adil is furious of his illness, Thia warms his heart amicably.
- How about this long plot?
- A pre-school teacher, Thia, and the man she loves, Adil, are sitting in a specialist hospital's seats, stupefied of their cancer diagnoses.
- They are constantly arguing, but the little time cancer leaves them has ironically brought the two closer than ever; when Thia's tumor spreads faster, Adil cements her strength sturdy, and when Adil is furious of his illness, Thia warms his heart amicably.
- As he starts to ask her hand in a marriage, they wonder; how long will their love last?
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How about this long plot?
A pre-school teacher, Thia, and the man she loves, Adil, are sitting in a specialist hospital's seats, stupefied of their cancer diagnoses. They are constantly arguing, but the little time cancer leaves them has ironically brought the two closer than ever; when Thia's tumor spreads faster, Adil cements her strength sturdy, and when Adil is furious of his illness,
A pre-school teacher, Thia, and the man she loves, Adil, are sitting in a specialist hospital's seats, stupefied of their cancer diagnoses. They are constantly arguing, but the little time cancer leaves them has ironically brought the two closer than ever; when Thia's tumor spreads faster, Adil cements her strength sturdy, and when Adil is furious of his illness,
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