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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Hi, can anyone please help me to check my grammatical mistakes in my writing below? Thank you in advance.

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Two detective partners from different dimensions pair up to solve a murder mystery that occurs half a century ago.

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A pair of detective buddies from two different dimensions team up to solve a murder, which takes place 50 years ago. The duo takes up the investigation in order to find the real murderer. As they dig up evidence and locate witnesses, and along the way, they encounter men, women, as well as vengeful spirits that try to stop them from finding out the truth.
  

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Along the way. as they dig up evidence and locate witnesses, they encounter men and women, as well as vengeful spirits that try to stop them from finding out the truth.

  • Along the way.
  • as they dig up evidence and locate witnesses, they encounter men and women, as well as vengeful spirits that try to stop them from finding out the truth.
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Along the way. as they dig up evidence and locate witnesses, they encounter men and women, as well as vengeful spirits that try to stop them from finding out the truth.
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Thank you sir. You mean as below:

A pair of detective buddies from two different dimensions team up to solve a murder, which takes place 50 years ago. The duo takes up the investigation in order to find the real murderer. Along the way, as they dig up evidence and locate witnesses, they encounter men, women, as well as vengeful spirits that t

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