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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Hi, are both sentences grammatically correct?
Short summary
A group of Taiwanese mountain climbers does not realize that the little girl dressed in red follows them home.
Long summary
A realtor living with his grandmother does not realize that the elderly woman has disappeared as his house is still well-kept. When he checks on the CCTV camera, he discovers that his grandmother has been followed by a little girl dressed in red. Finally, his grandmother returns home, but in return, the realtor becomes the one who goes missing.
Short summary
A group of Taiwanese mountain climbers does not realize that the little girl dressed in red follows them home.
Long summary
A realtor living with his grandmother does not realize that the elderly woman has disappeared as his house is still well-kept. When he checks on the CCTV camera, he discovers that his grandmother has been followed by a little girl dressed in red. Finally, his grandmother returns home, but in return, the realtor becomes the one who goes missing.
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Jenn123 A group of Taiwanese mountain climbers does not realize that the little girl dressed in red follows them home. Please note the underlined inconsistency.
- Jenn123 A group of Taiwanese mountain climbers does not realize that the little girl dressed in red follows them home.
- Please note the underlined inconsistency.
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Jenn123A group of Taiwanese mountain climbers does not realize that the little girl dressed in red follows them home.Please note the underlined inconsistency.
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How about this?
A group of mountain climbers did not realize that a little girl in red dress follows them home. No one in the team knew or saw the girl, but she is believed to be a kind of mountain demon.
A group of mountain climbers did not realize that a little girl in red dress follows them home. No one in the team knew or saw the girl, but she is believed to be a kind of mountain demon.
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I have underlined the problems:
A group of mountain climbers did not realize that a little girl in red dress follows them home. No one in the team knew or saw the girl, but she is believed to be a kind of mountain demon.
A group of mountain climbers did not realize that a little girl in red dress follows them home. No one in the team knew or saw the girl, but she is believed to be a kind of mountain demon.
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A group of mountain climbers did not realize that a little girl in a red dress follows them home. No one in the team knew or seen the girl, but she is believed to be a kind of mountain demon.
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How about this as a short summary?
A realtor’s grandma has disappeared, but strangely the house is well-kept as if she has never left. When he checks her camera and sees a video showing her being followed by a mysterious little girl in red.
A realtor’s grandma has disappeared, but strangely the house is well-kept as if she has never left. When he checks her camera and sees a video showing her being followed by a mysterious little girl in red.
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A group of mountain climbers did not realize that a little girl in a red dress had followed them home. No one in the team knew or had seen the girl, but she was believed to be a kind of mountain demon.
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Thank you so much, sir. But I have made some changes again. Could you please relook again on the short summary:
A realtor’s grandma has disappeared, but strangely the house is well-kept as if she has never left. He checks her camera and sees a video showing her being followed by a mysterious little girl in red.
A realtor’s grandma has disappeared, but strangely the house is well-kept as if she has never left. He checks her camera and sees a video showing her being followed by a mysterious little girl in red.
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Is my long summary good to go?
A realtor living with his grandmother does not realize that the elderly woman has disappeared as his house is still well-kept. When he checks on the CCTV camera, he discovers that his grandmother has been followed by a little girl dressed in red. Finally, his grandmother returns home, but in return, the realtor becomes the one who goes missing.
A realtor living with his grandmother does not realize that the elderly woman has disappeared as his house is still well-kept. When he checks on the CCTV camera, he discovers that his grandmother has been followed by a little girl dressed in red. Finally, his grandmother returns home, but in return, the realtor becomes the one who goes missing.
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Because the story centers on a real estate broker who was raised by and lives with his grandmother.
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