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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Hi, can anyone please help me to check my grammatical mistakes in my writing below?
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A mermaid, Shan is sent to assassinate a businessman, Xuan after his project threatens the life of her fellow merpeople, but the mermaid ends up falls in love with Xuan instead.
Long Summary
A wealthy business tycoon Xuan buys up some coastal land for a project. To get his money’s worth, however, he decides to fill in the sea. His project ends up damaging the ecosystem of the area, including the homes of a group of mermaids who live in the area. To stop Xuan, one of the leaders of the mermaid clan, Octopus dispatches a young mermaid Shan to seduce him. However, things start to get really complicated when Shan ends up falling in love with Xuan instead.
Short summary
A mermaid, Shan is sent to assassinate a businessman, Xuan after his project threatens the life of her fellow merpeople, but the mermaid ends up falls in love with Xuan instead.
Long Summary
A wealthy business tycoon Xuan buys up some coastal land for a project. To get his money’s worth, however, he decides to fill in the sea. His project ends up damaging the ecosystem of the area, including the homes of a group of mermaids who live in the area. To stop Xuan, one of the leaders of the mermaid clan, Octopus dispatches a young mermaid Shan to seduce him. However, things start to get really complicated when Shan ends up falling in love with Xuan instead.
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Jenn123 A mermaid, Sha n, is sent to assassinate a businessman, Xua n, after his project threatens the life of her fellow merpeople, but the mermaid ends up falls falling in love with Xuan instead. Jenn123 A wealthy business tycoo n, Xua n, buys up some coastal land for a project. To get his money’s worth, however, he decides to fill in and reclaim more land from the sea.
- Jenn123 A mermaid, Sha n, is sent to assassinate a businessman, Xua n, after his project threatens the life of her fellow merpeople, but the mermaid ends up falls falling in love with Xuan instead.
- Jenn123 A wealthy business tycoo n, Xua n, buys up some coastal land for a project.
- To get his money’s worth, however, he decides to fill in and reclaim more land from the sea.
- His project ends up damaging the ecosystem of the area, including the homes of a group of mermaids who live there.
- in the area.
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Jenn123A mermaid, Shan, is sent to assassinate a businessman, Xuan, after his project threatens the life of her fellow merpeople, but the mermaid ends upfallsfalling in love with Xuan instead.
Jenn123A wealthy business tycoon, Xuan, buys up some coastal land for a project. To get his mone
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teechrA mermaid, Shan, is sent to assassinate a businessman, Xuan, after his project threatens the life of her fellow merpeople in the sea, but the mermaid ends up falling in love with Xuan instead.
teechrA wealthy business tycoon, Xuan, buys up some coastal land for a project. To get his money’s worth, however, he decide
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