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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Hi, can anyone please help me to check my grammatical mistakes in my writing below?
Short summary
Two elderly home veterans jump into the back of a truck routing to the city, just to show each other whose child does better. When one backs down and another continues the journey, a new story unravels.
Long summary
To prove whose child has a better job, elderly home veterans Lim and Lam decide to pay their children a visit by jumping into the back of a truck driven by Ah Hock. Lim makes it to Kuala Lumpur, but Lam has to call it a day due to an injury. Feeling sorry for Lam, Ah Hock plans to have his own family to visit him in the elderly home. As usual, things are always easier said than done.
Short summary
Two elderly home veterans jump into the back of a truck routing to the city, just to show each other whose child does better. When one backs down and another continues the journey, a new story unravels.
Long summary
To prove whose child has a better job, elderly home veterans Lim and Lam decide to pay their children a visit by jumping into the back of a truck driven by Ah Hock. Lim makes it to Kuala Lumpur, but Lam has to call it a day due to an injury. Feeling sorry for Lam, Ah Hock plans to have his own family to visit him in the elderly home. As usual, things are always easier said than done.
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Jenn123 Short summar y: Two elderly residents from an old-people's home veterans jump into the back of a truck routing to heading towards the cit y just to show each other find out whose child does is doing better in life . When one backs down and another but the other continues the journey, a new story unravels. Jenn123 Long summar y: To prove whose child has a better job, elderly home retirement-home veterans Lim and Lam decide to pay their children a visit by jumping into the back of a truck driven by Ah Hock.
- Jenn123 Short summar y: Two elderly residents from an old-people's home veterans jump into the back of a truck routing to heading towards the cit y just to show each other find out whose child does is doing better in life .
- When one backs down and another but the other continues the journey, a new story unravels.
- Jenn123 Long summar y: To prove whose child has a better job, elderly home retirement-home veterans Lim and Lam decide to pay their children a visit by jumping into the back of a truck driven by Ah Hock.
- Lim makes it to Kuala Lumpur, but Lam has to call it a day due to an injury.
- Feeling sorry for Lam, Ah Hock makes plans to have his own family to visit him Lam in at the elderly retirement home.
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Jenn123Short summary: Two elderly residents from an old-people's homeveteransjump into the back of a truckrouting toheading towards the city just toshow each otherfind out whose childdoesis doing better in life. When one backs downand anotherbut the other
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