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Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
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Nini and Haikal plan for Aunty Lisa and Pak Su Hairi a trip to Gold Coast, Australia. They hire Zizan as their tour guide in Gold Coast. Zizan has never been to Gold Coast in his life. Everything that Nini and Haikal plan does not go accordingly but somehow it turns out to be such an awesome getaway.
  

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Nini and Haikal plan for Aunt ie Lisa and Pak Su Hairi… It is unclear how many or who are going to the Gold Coast. They hire Zizan to be their tour guide in the Gold Coast. ) Gold Coast in his life.

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  • Nini and Haikal plan for Aunt ie Lisa and Pak Su Hairi… It is unclear how many or who are going to the Gold Coast.
  • They hire Zizan to be their tour guide in the Gold Coast.
  • ) Gold Coast in his life.
  • ) After using the word ‘awesome’, I would normally use an exclamation point (after getaway).
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Nini and Haikal plan for Auntie Lisa and Pak Su Hairi…
It is unclear how many or who are going to the Gold Coast.
They hire Zizan to be their tour guide in the Gold Coast.
(In Queensland, “the Gold Coast” is a region and ‘Gold Coast’ is a city.)
Zizan has never been to (the city?) Gold Coast in his life. (Possibly ‘the Gold Coast’?)
After using the word ‘awesome’
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