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Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
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Hi, would appreciate if someone please check this sentence. Any grammatical errors? Thanks

A group of arts martial youngsters team up to bring down a warlord who tries to upend the kingdom of Siam and take over the country.
  

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I have underlined the problems: A group of arts martial youngsters team up to bring down a warlord who tries to upend the kingdom of Siam and take over the country.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined the problems: A group of arts martial youngsters team up to bring down a warlord who tries to upend the kingdom of Siam and take over the country.
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I have underlined the problems:

A group of arts martial youngsters team up to bring down a warlord who tries to upend the kingdom of Siam and take over the country.
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Mister MicawberA group of arts martial youngsters team up to bring down a warlord who tries to upend the kingdom of Siam and take over the country
Revised as blow:

A group of martial arts youngsters team up to bring down a warlord who tries to invert the kingdom of Siam and take over the country.
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A group of martial arts youngsters team up to bring down a warlord who tries to overturn/topple the kingdom of Siam and take over the country.
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Thank you Mister Micawber. Does this slogan corret?

Long time ago in Siam, Muay Thai exists to defend the country

Mister Micawber
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Jenn123Is this slogan correct?
A long time ago in Siam, Muay Thai lived to defend the country.
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