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Summarise the informstion by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graphs show the conclusion of analysis on bliss speed for wedded and unwedded citizens in the US , and the influence of kid on the general speed of wedded couples.

In the first graph show about bliss speed for wedded and unwedded of citizens in the US from 18 years old to 65 and over years old.

In wedded group , the bliss speed of the ages from 18 to 29 is higher than the bliss speed of unwedded group is 24% . The ages from 30 to 49 of wedded group have bliss speed is taller than unwedded group is 22% . The ages from 50 to 64 of unwedded group have bliss speed is lower than wedded group is 29%. The bliss speed of the ages 65 and over in unwedded group is lower than wedded group is 10%

So , we can see the bliss speed of wedded group is higher than compared with the bliss speed of wedded group.

In the second graph show about bliss speed for wedded couples of citizens in the US when they have kids under 18 , kis 18+ only and no kid.

Look at the graph , the bliss speed of wedded couples when they have kid under 18 is the highest with 44% . The wedded couples have kid 18+ only with bliss speed is 41% and no kid is 43%.

Overall , the bliss speed of wedded group didn't change much compared to wedded couples have kid.

  

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Here are a couple of quick comments. bliss speed I don't see anything in the graphs about speed. They seem to indicate levels of bliss.

  • Here are a couple of quick comments.
  • bliss speed I don't see anything in the graphs about speed.
  • They seem to indicate levels of bliss.
  • wedded and unwedded We almost always say 'married and unmarried'.
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Here are a couple of quick comments.


bliss speed I don't see anything in the graphs about speed. They seem to indicate levels of bliss.

wedded and unwedded We almost always say 'married and unmarried'.

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The graphs show the conclusion of analysis on bliss assessment for married and unmarried citizens in the US , and the influence of kid on the general speed of married couples.

In the first graph show about bliss speed for married and unmarried of citizens in the US from 18 years old to 65 and over years old.

In married group , the bliss assessment of the ages from 18 to 29 is highe

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Where is the graph?

The topic sentence seems very strange and incoherent. Did you copy it correctly?

Do not put the topic sentence in the "Subject" line. Put it with your answer in the message body.

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Speed refers to how fast cars or other vehicles go on a road. For example: The police will give you a ticket if you drive faster than the posted speed limit. The highest speed attained by a race car was over 400 km/hour. The speed of light was measured in the late 1800s at about 300,000 m/sec. The speed of sound varies with altitude and air tempera

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