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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Summaries
Hi there, could someone please check the following summaries. Basically, these summaries should be in present tense. So, let me know if you find errors. Thank you.
Short Plot
A serial killer is killed in an encounter by a team of police officers. However, the media is made to believe that it was a shoot-out between the police and criminals.
Long Plot
A cop and his colleague execute a serial killer who is backed by corrupt politicians and businessmen, through elaborately staged fake encounters to make the media believe that it was a shoot-out between the police and criminals. The tide turns against the cop when a human rights commission officer begins probing into one of his encounters.
Short Plot
A serial killer is killed in an encounter by a team of police officers. However, the media is made to believe that it was a shoot-out between the police and criminals.
Long Plot
A cop and his colleague execute a serial killer who is backed by corrupt politicians and businessmen, through elaborately staged fake encounters to make the media believe that it was a shoot-out between the police and criminals. The tide turns against the cop when a human rights commission officer begins probing into one of his encounters.
Top answer
) Long summary: A group of police officers, acting as vigilantes, execute, without trial, suspected a serial killer who has connections to powerful politicians and businessmen. This is their latest vigilante-style execution of a suspected criminal, and they cover it up as usual by making it look like an ordinary shootout between them and an armed criminal. Then a human rights commission official starts to suspect something is wrong and begins a probe into the killings by the officers.
- ) Long summary: A group of police officers, acting as vigilantes, execute, without trial, suspected a serial killer who has connections to powerful politicians and businessmen.
- This is their latest vigilante-style execution of a suspected criminal, and they cover it up as usual by making it look like an ordinary shootout between them and an armed criminal.
- Then a human rights commission official starts to suspect something is wrong and begins a probe into the killings by the officers.
- Short summary: A suspected serial killer is shot dead by police officers in an apparent shootout between the officers and an armed criminal.
- But the officers are acting as vigilantes, and this is the latest in a series of their vigilante-style executions.
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(The following revisions are based on US usage.)
Long summary:
A group of police officers, acting as vigilantes, execute, without trial, suspected a serial killer who has connections to powerful politicians and businessmen. This is their latest vigilante-style execution of a suspected criminal, and they cover it up as usual by making it look like an ordinary shootout between the
Long summary:
A group of police officers, acting as vigilantes, execute, without trial, suspected a serial killer who has connections to powerful politicians and businessmen. This is their latest vigilante-style execution of a suspected criminal, and they cover it up as usual by making it look like an ordinary shootout between the
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Thank you for correcting the summaries. But to me, these are too generic descriptions, I felt some of my points it's not in the following revised summaries. Is there any chance to summarize the short synopsis? It's too long. Please guide me. Thanks in advance.
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