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Perfect Stranger Posted 7 years ago
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Suggestions included vs included suggestions

Dear Users, Can both of the following sentences be considered as correct? 1) As always, I will read the report carefully and follow the included suggestions. 2) As always, I will read the report carefully and follow the suggestions included. I reckon the first one is slightly better but I don't know why... Thanks
  

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Perfect Stranger 1) As always, I will read the report carefully and follow its included suggestions. That is natural. Perfect Stranger 2) As always, I will read the report carefully and follow the suggestions included.

  • Perfect Stranger 1) As always, I will read the report carefully and follow its included suggestions.
  • That is natural.
  • Perfect Stranger 2) As always, I will read the report carefully and follow the suggestions included.
  • It's ok, but not as good as the one above.
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Perfect Stranger1) As always, I will read the report carefully and follow its included suggestions.

That is natural.

Perfect Stranger2) As always, I will read the report carefully and follow the suggestions included.

It's ok, but not as good as the one above.

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