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Guoguo914 Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
Suggestions for the following sentence?
Strategy consulting has always interests me as a place where people quickly and efficiently gather and digest information, be it data or fact, and turn it to recommendations that often point right to the crux of the problems businesses face.
Not sure about the "as a place where people" part.
Thought about change it to:
Strategy consulting has always interests me as a place where information gets quickly and efficiently gathered and digested, be it data or fact, and turned to recommendations that often point right to the crux of the problems businesses face.
Any suggestion is appreciated. Thanks
Not sure about the "as a place where people" part.
Thought about change it to:
Strategy consulting has always interests me as a place where information gets quickly and efficiently gathered and digested, be it data or fact, and turned to recommendations that often point right to the crux of the problems businesses face.
Any suggestion is appreciated. Thanks
Top answer
Both versions have merit. Here are my suggestions to each approach. ”
- Both versions have merit.
- Here are my suggestions to each approach.
- ”
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Both versions have merit. Here are my suggestions to each approach.
“Strategy consulting has always interested me as an environment where people quickly and efficiently gather and digest information, be it data or fact, and turn it into recommendations that often point right to the crux of the problems businesses face.”
“Strategy consulting has al
“Strategy consulting has always interested me as an environment where people quickly and efficiently gather and digest information, be it data or fact, and turn it into recommendations that often point right to the crux of the problems businesses face.”
“Strategy consulting has al
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