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Debangkok Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Suggestion Letter,Please revise to me

I would like to compliant and suggest about MBA program (International MBA)

Dear Project Manager,

I have sen your program from many advertisement.This is a intersting program and also I used to join with your last Open House but there I saw many Thai language such as your notice and your website.I think,it should have internatiomal atmospheer more and this program suite for anyone who are not finish or work in business fields thus it can not offer to anyone that would like to have a speciliztion in any fields like marketing, finanace and step up to top manager.

You can not be in the thing that you told any one but your action

I look forword to join with you in the future

Best regards

Ab
  

Top answer

Hello: Please tell me whether you are in agreement (compliant) or are not satisfied (complaint)? I am not sure of your usage. Thank you.

  • Hello: Please tell me whether you are in agreement (compliant) or are not satisfied (complaint)?
  • I am not sure of your usage.
  • Thank you.
  • Dee
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Hello:

Please tell me whether you are in agreement (compliant) or are not satisfied (complaint)? I am not sure of your usage.

Thank you.
Dee
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I would like to study in real international MBA progra, thus the program should communicate with english language and including notice ,website

Thank you for your attention

ab
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Welcome to the forums!

It is a little difficult to understand your sentences, but I made a few corrections and suggestions below.
debangkokI would like to compliant and suggest about MBA program (International MBA)

Dear Project Manager,

I have seen sen your program in from many advertisements.This is a
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Thank you so much for your kind revise it to me

for your quetion the detail as below

1.who are did not finish or works in business:

I mean that this programe is suitable for whom that did not graduate from business field or did not work in business field

because this program prepared who had not business backgroud.

2.You can not be in the think that y

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