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Ocsenttdd Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Suggesting letter
Dear teachers, these day I have tried my best to learn writting skill. I recognise that this one is very difficult to study.
And I wrote a letter below but do not know whether it is right or not, please check my letter and help me to correct it.
Thanks in advance.
Dear Sir or Madam.
I am belong to the English group which usually use your hall for our appoitment every week. For a long time we have used your department, all of us are very satisfied and have intened to continue the contract for long term target.
But I have heard that the rent for the hall will double next month. This thing make us consider so much. After discussing this problem altogeter, we sugget you that we would pay the charge with a price between the old and the new price. Furthermore, we commit to rent your hall at least the next three years.
Please do not hestitae to contact with me throung my cell phone number and via email whether you agree with our suggestion or not.
We look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours sincerely.
John
And I wrote a letter below but do not know whether it is right or not, please check my letter and help me to correct it.
Thanks in advance.
Dear Sir or Madam.
I am belong to the English group which usually use your hall for our appoitment every week. For a long time we have used your department, all of us are very satisfied and have intened to continue the contract for long term target.
But I have heard that the rent for the hall will double next month. This thing make us consider so much. After discussing this problem altogeter, we sugget you that we would pay the charge with a price between the old and the new price. Furthermore, we commit to rent your hall at least the next three years.
Please do not hestitae to contact with me throung my cell phone number and via email whether you agree with our suggestion or not.
We look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours sincerely.
John
Top answer
I have underlined some problem areas. Please post your revised letter. Dear Sir or Madam.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please post your revised letter.
- Dear Sir or Madam.
- I am belong to the English group which usually use your hall for our appoitment every week.
- For a long time we have used your departm ent, al l of us are very satisfied and have intened to continue the contract for long term target .
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please post your revised letter.
Dear Sir or Madam.
I am belong to the English group which usually use your hall for our appoitment every week. For a long time we have used your department, all of us are very satisfied and have intened to continue the contract for long term target.
But I hav
Dear Sir or Madam.
I am belong to the English group which usually use your hall for our appoitment every week. For a long time we have used your department, all of us are very satisfied and have intened to continue the contract for long term target.
But I hav
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Dear Mister Micawber, I have just corrected my mistakes. Please check them for me again. Thank you.
And the words in bold are which one I could not justify them. Sorry for my weekness.
Dear Sir or Madam.
I belong to the English group which usually uses your hall for our appointment every week. For a long time we have used your department. All of us are very satisfied and
And the words in bold are which one I could not justify them. Sorry for my weekness.
Dear Sir or Madam.
I belong to the English group which usually uses your hall for our appointment every week. For a long time we have used your department. All of us are very satisfied and
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Dear Sir or Madam.
I belong to the English group which usually uses your hall for our meetings every week. For a long time we have used your department. All of us are very satisfied and intend to continue the contract over the long term. But I have heard that the rent for the hall will double next month. This worries us. After discussing this problem among oursel
I belong to the English group which usually uses your hall for our meetings every week. For a long time we have used your department. All of us are very satisfied and intend to continue the contract over the long term. But I have heard that the rent for the hall will double next month. This worries us. After discussing this problem among oursel
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Thank for your help very much, Mister Micawber.
But I haven't understood the sentence "After discussing this problem among ourselves". May I use "together" placed for "among ourselves"? Because I think that's also right. Or "among ourselves" is just more formal in this context.
But I haven't understood the sentence "After discussing this problem among ourselves". May I use "together" placed for "among ourselves"? Because I think that's also right. Or "among ourselves" is just more formal in this context.
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May I use "together" placed for "among ourselves"?-- No, since that makes it ambiguous as to who is included in the discussion.
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