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Vasuarm Posted 17 years ago
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Hi, please correct the following sentences. Thank you.
But, my god, when a wife contracts terminal deceases like cancer, brain tumors and multiple sclerosis what then would a loving/caring husband do? Most of the husbands, hold your breath, would abandon their wives and prepare themselves for the next course of life. So goes the findings of a Survey.
But, my god, when a wife contracts terminal deceases like cancer, brain tumors and multiple sclerosis what then would a loving/caring husband do? Most of the husbands, hold your breath, would abandon their wives and prepare themselves for the next course of life. So goes the findings of a Survey.
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This is a little informal. " My suggestions are the color ba r words; the crossouts are the rejected wording. When a wife contracts a terminal disease deceases like cancer, brain tumors or and multiple sclerosis, what then would a loving and caring husband do?
- This is a little informal.
- " My suggestions are the color ba r words; the crossouts are the rejected wording.
- When a wife contracts a terminal disease deceases like cancer, brain tumors or and multiple sclerosis, what then would a loving and caring husband do?
- Most of th e husbands, hold your breath, would abandon their wives and prepare themselves for the next course <?
- > of life.
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This is a little informal. To make it more standard, I would drop the "But, my ***..." and perhaps "hold your breath." My suggestions are the color bar words; the crossouts are the rejected wording.
When a wife contracts a terminal
When a wife contracts a terminal
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