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Antonija Posted 20 years ago
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successor

Hi,

Which of the subtitles sounds better? It should sound interesting because it should draw readers to the text that follows. The text is about a young travel writer who followed the footsteps, actually literally followed the exact way as another famous, older and now deceased travel writer had walked.You are more than welcome to offer your suggestions. Thank you.

Famous Croatian travel-writer Mirko Seljan got his successor/

Following the footsteps of famous Croatian travel-writer Mirko Seljan
  

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Antonija Hi, Which of the subtitles sounds better? It should sound interesting because it should draw readers to the text that follows. You are more than welcome to offer your suggestions.

— Philip

  • Antonija Hi, Which of the subtitles sounds better?
  • It should sound interesting because it should draw readers to the text that follows.
  • You are more than welcome to offer your suggestions.
  • Thank you.
  • Famous Croatian travel-writer Mirko Seljan got his successor/ Following the footsteps of famous Croatian travel-writer Mirko Seljan insert comma before continuing I think the second one sounds better.
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AntonijaHi,

Which of the subtitles sounds better? It should sound interesting because it should draw readers to the text that follows. The text is about a young travel writer who followed the footsteps, actually literally followed the exact way as another famous, older and now deceased travel writer had walked.You are more than welcome to offer your suggestions.
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