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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Successful students

Can I have your comments on the following sentences?

While I think the number of hours spent studying decided a successful student, he thinks that study technique plays more important role in being a successful student.
  

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Hi, I think "decided" is misplaced here. I don't know whether it can be used. While I think the number of hours spent studying leads you to a succesful student, he thinks that the technique of studying plays a more important role in beeing a succesful student.

  • Hi, I think "decided" is misplaced here.
  • I don't know whether it can be used.
  • While I think the number of hours spent studying leads you to a succesful student, he thinks that the technique of studying plays a more important role in beeing a succesful student.
  • wait for other opinions sun 94
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Hi,

I think "decided" is misplaced here. I don't know whether it can be used.

While I think the number of hours spent studying leads you to a succesful student, he thinks that the technique of studying plays a more important role in beeing a succesful student.

wait for other opinions sun 94

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