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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Successful students
Can I have your comments on the following sentences?
While I think the number of hours spent studying decided a successful student, he thinks that study technique plays more important role in being a successful student.
While I think the number of hours spent studying decided a successful student, he thinks that study technique plays more important role in being a successful student.
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Hi, I think "decided" is misplaced here. I don't know whether it can be used. While I think the number of hours spent studying leads you to a succesful student, he thinks that the technique of studying plays a more important role in beeing a succesful student.
- Hi, I think "decided" is misplaced here.
- I don't know whether it can be used.
- While I think the number of hours spent studying leads you to a succesful student, he thinks that the technique of studying plays a more important role in beeing a succesful student.
- wait for other opinions sun 94
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Hi,
I think "decided" is misplaced here. I don't know whether it can be used.
While I think the number of hours spent studying leads you to a succesful student, he thinks that the technique of studying plays a more important role in beeing a succesful student.
wait for other opinions sun 94
I think "decided" is misplaced here. I don't know whether it can be used.
While I think the number of hours spent studying leads you to a succesful student, he thinks that the technique of studying plays a more important role in beeing a succesful student.
wait for other opinions sun 94
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