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Bahareh M Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Substituting "of" by another preposition

Students try to enroll in programs they think will lead to financial success, institutions tout earnings of graduates, and governments push the macroeconomic benefits of more graduates and higher-paying jobs.

Source: Hard Questions on Educational Change, by Pasi Sahlberg, Jonathan Hasak, and Vanessa Rodriguez

Hello,

Is it possible to substitute "of" by another preposition in the above-mentioned sentence?

(My reason is that I guess these "of"s have made the sentence more complicated than it really is. The sentence is straightforward, but still I'm not sure whether I have comprehended it correctly.)

Thank you.

  

Top answer

of seems best to me. For easier understanding, one could try to simplify into simpler sentences: Students try to enrol in programs they think will lead to financial success. Institutions tout the earnings of graduates.

  • of seems best to me.
  • For easier understanding, one could try to simplify into simpler sentences: Students try to enrol in programs they think will lead to financial success.
  • Institutions tout the earnings of graduates.
  • Governments push the macroeconomic benefits of having more graduates and higher-paying jobs.
  • Do you still have trouble with this?
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of seems best to me.

For easier understanding, one could try to simplify into simpler sentences:

Students try to enrol in programs they think will lead to financial success.

Institutions tout the earnings of graduates.

Governments push the macroeconomic benefits

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