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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

subordinations

hi at all....

I had to rewrite a text with the correct subordinations and relative clauses. I'm not sure whether I did it correctly and whether I used the right punctuations. Maybe someone read threw it quickly, thanks Emotion: smile

Hippocrates used garlic as a pharmaceutical to treat different diseases, and so did other early doctors. They believed that a plant or herb that had a very penetrating odour must have a lot of therapeutic value. Even though tuberculosis and leprosy are not at all alike, garlic was used to treat both of them. There was a Roman nauralist called Pliny who listed sicty-one diseases that garlic was supposed to cure. And he added the information that garlic has very powerful properties because serpents and scorpions are driven away by the smell of it.

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It looks pretty good-- Hippocrates used garlic as a pharmaceutical to treat different diseases, and so did other early doctors. They believed that a plant or herb that had a very penetrating odour must have great therapeutic value. Even though tuberculosis and leprosy are not at all alike, garlic was used to treat both of them.

  • It looks pretty good-- Hippocrates used garlic as a pharmaceutical to treat different diseases, and so did other early doctors.
  • They believed that a plant or herb that had a very penetrating odour must have great therapeutic value.
  • Even though tuberculosis and leprosy are not at all alike, garlic was used to treat both of them.
  • The Roman naturalist Pliny listed sixty -one diseases that garlic was supposed to cure , and he commented that garlic has very powerful properties because serpents and scorpions are driven away by the smell of it.
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It looks pretty good--

Hippocrates used garlic as a pharmaceutical to treat different diseases, and so did other early doctors. They believed that a plant or herb that had a very penetrating odour must have great therapeutic value. Even though tuberculosis and leprosy are not at all alike, garlic was used to treat both of them. The Roman naturalist Pliny listed

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