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Book aqua 129 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Submission of Application for refund

Please enclose find herewith an application duly received from Mr John
  

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book aqua 129 Please enclose find herewith an application duly received from Mr John Your sentence is hard to understand. It seems you are passing an application from Mr John to someone else, though the reason he can't do this himself is unclear. It seems to me that it all boils down to this: I've enclosed Mr.

  • book aqua 129 Please enclose find herewith an application duly received from Mr John Your sentence is hard to understand.
  • It seems you are passing an application from Mr John to someone else, though the reason he can't do this himself is unclear.
  • It seems to me that it all boils down to this: I've enclosed Mr.
  • John's application.
  • It is also a mystery why the recipient of this note would not know what was enclosed just by looking at it.
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book aqua 129 Please enclose find herewith an application duly received from Mr John

Your sentence is hard to understand. It seems you are passing an application from Mr John to someone else, though the reason he can't do this himself is unclear. It seems to me that it all boils down to this:

I've enclosed Mr. John's application.

It is

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book aqua 129Mr John

It's not normal to use Mr with a first name only.

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