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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Subject verb agreement issue
Deja sits on the couch lost in her cosmic screen saver.
Is the sentence fine as is? I don't think so. I would like to keep it as one sentence if possible.
Is the sentence fine as is? I don't think so. I would like to keep it as one sentence if possible.
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It would benefit from a comma after "couch". Otherwise it is OK in creative writing. The word "cosmic" would probably not be suitable for plain factual writing.
- It would benefit from a comma after "couch".
- Otherwise it is OK in creative writing.
- The word "cosmic" would probably not be suitable for plain factual writing.
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It would benefit from a comma after "couch". Otherwise it is OK in creative writing. The word "cosmic" would probably not be suitable for plain factual writing.
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