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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Subject pronoun question

Is it clear that the second 'his' refers to Tam? FYI- Xingax is the elf.
Tam made his way to Xingax and ordered the elf to immediately transport them inside the Keep of Sorrows, which had been completely taken by his forces.
  

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No completely clear, no.

  • No completely clear, no.
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No completely clear, no.
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Thanks, I will definitely revise the sentence.
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Would this revision work? Tam is the lich and Xingax is the elf.


Is it clear that the first 'his' refers to Tam and the second 'his' refers to Xingax?
Tam made his way to Xingax and ordered the elf to immediately use his magic to transport them inside the Keep of Sorrows, which had been completely taken by the lich's forces.


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Okay awesome, thanks for your help.

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