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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Subject pronoun
Is it clear that the 'his' refers to Caramon?
In 351 AC, during the middle stages of the War of the Lance, Tika helped Caramon, his friends, and the plainspeople Goldmoon and Riverwind escape from the Inn of the Last Home when Hederick, the High Theocrat of Solace, sought their arrest for possession of the Blue Crystal Staff
In 351 AC, during the middle stages of the War of the Lance, Tika helped Caramon, his friends, and the plainspeople Goldmoon and Riverwind escape from the Inn of the Last Home when Hederick, the High Theocrat of Solace, sought their arrest for possession of the Blue Crystal Staff
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Riverwind to escape...
- Riverwind to escape...
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Suggestion: ...helped Caramon and his friends, as well as the plainspeople......Riverwind to escape...
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Thanks a lot for all your help. Would this revision work too?
In 351 AC, during the middle stages of the War of the Lance, Tika helped Caramon and his friends, who were joined by the plainspeople Goldmoon and Riverwind, to escape from the Inn of the Last Home when Hederick
In 351 AC, during the middle stages of the War of the Lance, Tika helped Caramon and his friends, who were joined by the plainspeople Goldmoon and Riverwind, to escape from the Inn of the Last Home when Hederick
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cboutin3Thanks a lot for all your help. Would this revision work too?In 351 AC, during the middle stages of the War of the Lance, Tika helped Caramon and his friends, who were joined by the plainspeople Goldmoon and Riverwind, to escape from the Inn of the Last Home when Hederick, the High Theocrat of Solace, sought their arrest for possession of the Blue Crystal Staff.
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