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LeviP Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Subject line

Hi,

I work as a Business Development Executive and I want to write emails to my clients who are franchisors. I wonder if this subject line is correct "Client name: Fish your franchisees at my company's name Franchise Expo".

Please suggest if you have a better subject line other than this.

Warm regards,

Levi
  

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Hi, I work as a Business Development Executive and I want to write emails to my clients who are franchisors. I wonder if this subject line is correct " Client name: Fish for your franchisees at my company's name Franchise Expo". Please suggest if you have a better subject line other than this.

— Clive

  • Hi, I work as a Business Development Executive and I want to write emails to my clients who are franchisors.
  • I wonder if this subject line is correct " Client name: Fish for your franchisees at my company's name Franchise Expo".
  • Please suggest if you have a better subject line other than this.
  • This is OK if you like the fishing metaphor and its humour.
  • I assume yu are trying to be amusing.
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Hi,

I work as a Business Development Executive and I want to write emails to my clients who are franchisors. I wonder if this subject line is correct "Client name: Fish for your franchisees at my company's name Franchise Expo".

Please suggest if you have a better subject line other than this.

This is OK if you like the fishing metaphor and its humo
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