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Dime Posted 13 years ago
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Stupid question: Is it weird to refer to someone in two different ways in the same context?

The perfectionist, stupidly self-conscious and over-analytical side of me wants to know: Is it weird if I refer to someone as, for example, 'female' and then refer to that someone again as 'girl'? Like if I were to write, "The male is silly, the female can be too silly. The boy is silly because he doesn't always analyze things. Whereas, the girl over-analyzes everything." Is this too confusing?
  

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dime Is it weird if I refer to someone as, for example, 'female' and then refer to that someone again as 'girl'? Like if I were to write, "The male is silly, the female can be too silly. The boy is silly because he doesn't always analyze things.

  • dime Is it weird if I refer to someone as, for example, 'female' and then refer to that someone again as 'girl'?
  • Like if I were to write, "The male is silly, the female can be too silly.
  • The boy is silly because he doesn't always analyze things.
  • " Is this too confusing?
  • This is a common stylistic technique for variety that is very effective for good writers but counterproductive for poor ones.
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dime Is it weird if I refer to someone as, for example, 'female' and then refer to that someone again as 'girl'? Like if I were to write, "The male is silly, the female can be too silly. The boy is silly because he doesn't always analyze things. Whereas, the girl over-analyzes everything." Is this too confusing?
This is a common stylistic technique for variety

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