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Rularn Posted 14 years ago
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Student looking for a job

Hello boys and girls!

Can somebody verify this application? I would be so happy. It will be posted at a Mountainbike forum så they will know what I mean by riding etc Emotion: smile

"Hello fellow riders!

I’m a 27 year old student from Sweden who is looking for a cool place somewhere in the United States where I can do my Master thesis and have a good time riding the mountains at the same time.

I received my Bachelor degree in Science 2009 and have been working with windmills and network grid calculations / optimization until this spring when I decided to continue with my studies for a Master degree in Energy and Environmental engineering.

Don’t hesitate to contact me if you have any questions or if somebody you know can help me finding a job or a project within the field of Energy and Environmental engineering where I can do my degree project. My plan is to be in the Unites States between january and april next year.

Thank you very much Emotion: smile"
  

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Hello, rularn. Welcome to English Forums. I am neither a boy nor a girl but a 70-year-old man.

  • Hello, rularn.
  • Welcome to English Forums.
  • I am neither a boy nor a girl but a 70-year-old man.
  • 'Hello boys and girls' is an inappropriate greeting to strangers.
  • Hello fellow riders!
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Hello, rularn. Welcome to English Forums. I am neither a boy nor a girl but a 70-year-old man. 'Hello boys and girls' is an inappropriate greeting to strangers.

Hello fellow riders!

I’m a 27-year-old student from Sweden who is looking for a cool place somewhere in the United States where I can do my master's thesis and have a good time riding in the mountains.

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Thank you very much Mister Micawber,
Your words were very much appreciated.

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