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I am fourty years old. My height is 1.8m and my hair is blond. My hobbys are walking and clymbing in the mountain. My job is Quality-Manager. I live ten years at Russikon. I weake up at seven o'chlock in the moring. I go for breakfast in the kitchen. After the breakfast and I drive to work by car. In the office there is a lot of work. I have a break at ten o'clock and I drink a tea. 12 o'clock I go home for lunch.
In the future I will a good life with my family. I hope I get a lot of money. I will learn english for my job. I hope you wil be happy with my history.
I am fourty years old. My height is 1.8m and my hair is blond. My hobbys are walking and clymbing in the mountain. My job is Quality-Manager. I live ten years at Russikon. I weake up at seven o'chlock in the moring. I go for breakfast in the kitchen. After the breakfast and I drive to work by car. In the office there is a lot of work. I have a break at ten o'clock and I drink a tea. 12 o'clock I go home for lunch.
In the future I will a good life with my family. I hope I get a lot of money. I will learn english for my job. I hope you wil be happy with my history.
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I have underlined some problems. Please correct them and post your revision here. I am fourty years old.
- I have underlined some problems.
- Please correct them and post your revision here.
- I am fourty years old.
- 8m and my hair is blond.
- My hobbys are walking and clymbing in the mountain .
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I have underlined some problems. Please correct them and post your revision here.
I am fourty years old. My height is 1.8m and my hair is blond. My hobbys are walking and clymbing in the mountain. My job is Quality-Manager. I live ten years at Russikon. I weake up at seven o'chlock in the moring. I go for breakfast in
I am fourty years old. My height is 1.8m and my hair is blond. My hobbys are walking and clymbing in the mountain. My job is Quality-Manager. I live ten years at Russikon. I weake up at seven o'chlock in the moring. I go for breakfast in
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