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Fortune Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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1 font 00 Hi everyone! 02 br
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00 Basically, I'm struggling when it comes to creative writing. I post on forums on a regular basis, but unfortunately can never find the words or ideas to make one long enough... Here's an example of my writing... Comments and help appreciated... 02 font 02 br
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00 Fred frowned and approached the newest member, “It’s Blob to you… I don’t lik’ bein’ called Blobby,” he replied, poking Pyro in the chest. His relationship with Pyro was, well, put it this way; Fred found it hard to maintain good relationships with people. He was more interested in his pizza and when it would get there… 02 br
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00 Shoving past Pyro, Fred poked his huge head out of the door, in anticipation. “Where the hell is this pizza!” he shouted. If it didn’t get here quick, it was normally a friend of Blob’s, who paid the price for it. 02 br
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00 One good thing was that Wanda was here to keep everyone in check. She certainly new how to lie down some rules, but Fred liked it that way… For some reason Fred looked at most women as mother figures, instead, of an opposite sex… 0-
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00 Basically, I'm struggling when it comes to creative writing. I post on forums on a regular basis, but unfortunately can never find the words or ideas to make one long enough... Here's an example of my writing... Comments and help appreciated... 02 font 02 br
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00 Fred frowned and approached the newest member, “It’s Blob to you… I don’t lik’ bein’ called Blobby,” he replied, poking Pyro in the chest. His relationship with Pyro was, well, put it this way; Fred found it hard to maintain good relationships with people. He was more interested in his pizza and when it would get there… 02 br
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00 Shoving past Pyro, Fred poked his huge head out of the door, in anticipation. “Where the hell is this pizza!” he shouted. If it didn’t get here quick, it was normally a friend of Blob’s, who paid the price for it. 02 br
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00 One good thing was that Wanda was here to keep everyone in check. She certainly new how to lie down some rules, but Fred liked it that way… For some reason Fred looked at most women as mother figures, instead, of an opposite sex… 0-
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1 i 00 Is this lifted out of something that gives us more context? Fred is called Blob, not Fred, and Pyro is the newest member? Why is he sometimes referred to as Fred and sometimes as Blob? (Fred poked his head.. a friend of Blob's...) Don't use ... instead of periods when you end a sentence. 02 i 02 br
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00 Fred frowned and approached the newest member 01 b
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00 Fred frowned and approached the newest member 01 b
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