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Goldenboy1 Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Structured properly

Would you say that the following sentences have been structured properly? If no, how can I improve them? Please let me know. Thank you!

Vertex advised us that the earliest availabe date is on the 21st March, but we have told them to raise the job as a matter of urgency.We will advise you as soon as we receive an update from them.

  

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The structure is OK,but here are a few edits. We will advise you as soon as we receive an update from them.

  • The structure is OK,but here are a few edits.
  • We will advise you as soon as we receive an update from them.
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The structure is OK,but here are a few edits.

Vertex has advised us that the earliest available date is on the 21st March, but we have told them to treat the job as a matter of urgency.We will advise you as soon as we receive an update from them.

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