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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is the "with a driftwood crown" part of the sentence in the correct spot? Balon was crowned beneath Nagga’s Ribs on the island of Old Wyk by the priest Tarle the Thrice-Drowned with a driftwood crown
  

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I'd put it nearer the first part, eg Balon was crowned with driftwood beneath Nagga’s Ribs on the island of Old Wyk by the priest Tarle the Thrice-Drowned.

  • I'd put it nearer the first part, eg Balon was crowned with driftwood beneath Nagga’s Ribs on the island of Old Wyk by the priest Tarle the Thrice-Drowned.
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I'd put it nearer the first part,
eg Balon was crowned with driftwood beneath Nagga’s Ribs on the island of Old Wyk by the priest Tarle the Thrice-Drowned.

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