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Susancarolinesk Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Structure of sentence with ' wish '

Hi, how would you write this sentence please? Is it correct? Thank you

- An achievement for the future that I wish to reach is to have a job I love to do

  

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It's rather clunky, and "reach" and "achievement" don't collocate terribly well. This is one suggestion: My wish/hope for the future is to have a job I love to do.

  • It's rather clunky, and "reach" and "achievement" don't collocate terribly well.
  • This is one suggestion: My wish/hope for the future is to have a job I love to do.
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It's rather clunky, and "reach" and "achievement" don't collocate terribly well. This is one suggestion:

My wish/hope for the future is to have a job I love to do.

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