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KhoshtipMan Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Structure

Hi all,


Does this sentence have any issue, please?


Announced as the winner of the scholarship, everybody congratulated Dimitri.

  

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In terms of grammar, that sounds to me like ' Announced as the winner of the scholarship' describes ' everybody'. Better English is eg Everybody congratulated Dimitri, announced as the winner of the scholarship .

  • In terms of grammar, that sounds to me like ' Announced as the winner of the scholarship' describes ' everybody'.
  • Better English is eg Everybody congratulated Dimitri, announced as the winner of the scholarship .
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In terms of grammar, that sounds to me like 'Announced as the winner of the scholarship' describes 'everybody'.

Better English is eg Everybody congratulated Dimitri, announced as the winner of the scholarship.

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