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Soheil1 Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary
Structure
Hi.
Is 'structure' used correctly in:
The similarity between the predominant mentality, views, and beliefs of the different classes and what is apparent in the paintings and also the Qajar society, as well as the attempt by the artist to represent exactly with was present in the sociocultural structure of this period, all are suggestive of a kind of social continuity that arise from the heart of the daily experiences of the people.
?Thanks in advance
Is 'structure' used correctly in:
The similarity between the predominant mentality, views, and beliefs of the different classes and what is apparent in the paintings and also the Qajar society, as well as the attempt by the artist to represent exactly with was present in the sociocultural structure of this period, all are suggestive of a kind of social continuity that arise from the heart of the daily experiences of the people.
?Thanks in advance
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"structure" appears to be correct. I suppose "with was present" should be "what was present"? "arise" should be "arose".
- "structure" appears to be correct.
- I suppose "with was present" should be "what was present"?
- "arise" should be "arose".
- The first part of the sentence is quite hard to parse.
- It can be read in different ways, depending on what is being compared with what, and it is not totally obvious which is intended.
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"structure" appears to be correct.
I suppose "with was present" should be "what was present"?
"arise" should be "arose".
The first part of the sentence is quite hard to parse. It can be read in different ways, depending on what is being compared with what, and it is not totally obvious which is intended.
I suppose "with was present" should be "what was present"?
"arise" should be "arose".
The first part of the sentence is quite hard to parse. It can be read in different ways, depending on what is being compared with what, and it is not totally obvious which is intended.
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I am guessing that you are referring to the similarity between these things:
(1) the predominant mentality, views, and beliefs of the different classes
(2) what is apparent in the paintings and also (apparent in) the Qajar society
If you do mean this, I think it would be easier to read if you changed it to:
The similarity between the predominant mentality, views, and
(1) the predominant mentality, views, and beliefs of the different classes
(2) what is apparent in the paintings and also (apparent in) the Qajar society
If you do mean this, I think it would be easier to read if you changed it to:
The similarity between the predominant mentality, views, and
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